Hi readers today were doing Essay Brainstorming and I wrote about Sports Better than Music and I choose Sports because it develops your skills in playing games and a good exercise.
Essay Brainstorming
Sports better than Music
Benefits of Sports
- It Improves our physical skills like coordination and balance
- It helps us to learn teamwork and sportsmanship
- It help us to learn how to discipline ourselves during the games
- It help us to learn to focus on a goal
- It is a good experience to participate in sports
- It is fun and I enjoyable
Benefits of Music
- It helps develop social skills.
- It helps build their confidence.
- It inspires creativity.
- It teaches how to be patient
- It is a great form of expression.
- It teaches how to be disciplined.
Introduction
Do you love sports? Others loves Music because they listen to music and they feel
happy if there is music played. But a lot of young ones loves sports especially
boys,because they are good players and wanted to be famous in different games.
Most girls like music because they really enjoyed listening to music and dance on it.
I believe sport is better than music because it improves our body physically by participating in different games. We also learn how to discipline ourselves during the games for the good of the team. We showed teamwork and sportsmanship too. We have focus on the instructions of the coach in winning the game but we need also to accept failure. In music helps develop social but not physical skills We learn to listen music and we learn create songs. Sometimes music is a distraction in studying. So I choose sports because it makes me learn a lot s of skills and it is my favourite was basketball because it’s so easy to learn by players and it is fun.It me you easy to learn sport and it makes fun and enjoyed.
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