Hi guys. This week we have been learning about the polar bear and he leaven the snow and he eat fish and see lone just like that OK bye
he just found one and I can swim faster and he can live in the cold and he just has a polar bear friend. he is big and grow like a dog.
he likes the snow and his friend finds food to eat and her hand it’s very big and he’s just eating the fish and just swimming. the fish thinks he’s slow and he's just happy and he creeps up and pounces
on the fish. t has to get the snow and he just no snow. that means he has The polar bear goes to the sade snow and he likes to eat sea lions and he can eat big sea lions and no fish. he just likes eating, he’s not a monster. And waste jumping to find the fish big but he cont and her friend he not her and he find hor one friend but he sad and seid why I can't ok and he happy because he find si loin and he con eat and he cot finish and he se the baby bird he eat that and there’s big si loan and he con eat big because he big and he was angry hem and he's eating aders and he garet to eat and go more snowe and there's a penguin small and watch the tpoto the polar bear and he happy again and he got the egg bird and he eat and her saying like a bear and he wock to far away and he hangre and there’s the fish and he eating and he not eating bekas he’s not a hangri he go now and more fish big grey and there’s a small fish and no flowers and he was 3 friends and he’s wayte polar and her eyes like a small and big her body and he cont eat bot he leve into the snow and he find the fish big and he jump and he eating and find the ball and he con play
Hi Hans. Look like your doing good job about your polar bears. Maybe you can look at your writing because there were to many (and) that's why I went to comment on your blog to say these thing. But Hans you did a really good job now on your writing keep your good writing and sometimes you will get better on your writing just keeping up your good works Hans.
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ReplyDeleteI just want to say amazing work you have done here though check your spelling for later on, bye!